Unforgettable Holiday

The most unforgettable holiday which I had is when I went to Untung Jawa Island with my friend 2 years ago. Untung Jawa Island is situated in Seribu Island. I went to there by a car with 8 others people. That were Tami ,Yoy ,Anam, alun ,rande,nana,ridha, and mami. Because of that, the car was completely jammed. We gathered at Tami’s house and went to there at 1 P.M. On the road, we were stuck in a traffic jam, so we arrived in Marina Harbor at 5 P.M. Because it was getting late, we immediately rent a ship for going to Untung Jawa Island. 10 minutes later, we arrived in the dock of Untung Jawa Island. Then, we were looking for a home to stay, but all of home had been full. Finally, we slept in a rent mat near the beach. That’s all about my unforgettable holiday with my friend.

Topic                            : The most unforgettable holiday.

Controlling idea         : I went to Untung Jawa Island with my friend 2 years ago.

Concluding sentences  :That’s all about my unforgettable holiday with my friend.

 She is Something

Novi Yanti is one of my friends that are spoiled. I knew her when she came up to me in the first class. She lives in North Bekasi. She was the first child of three brothers, although her first child as the last child in nature.Once I've lived in a rent house for 1 month. I'm very happy know her because she is very care to me and always makes me smile and laugh. Moreover we often stories about the family and campus. Sometimes she stories something about class, she complains in the lesson. She wanna be a perfect person in doing her life. When her wish doesn't appropriate with real it, she will feel down. If she feels like that, she feels fail and can't do it. Sometimes I feel disappointed with her because it makes down. So, I hope she can positive thinking and don't give up in doing to something..